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Post by Nathaniel Parker on Nov 3, 2010 22:14:33 GMT -5
Yeah it's really bad, deal with it XD
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The room is dark It is empty, except There is a girl Standing in the center, Knowing she is alone.
Her voice carries Throughout the room Even though The only people who hear Are not real.
It soothes her pain To believe Someone else is there, But in the end She is alone.
I am alone.
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Post by Jason Grace on Nov 3, 2010 22:20:10 GMT -5
Aw! I like it.
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Post by Nathaniel Parker on Nov 3, 2010 22:27:14 GMT -5
XD I'll bet it goes against several rules I learned when I went to this summer school thing, but whatever XD
Thanks :]
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Post by Jason Grace on Nov 3, 2010 22:29:24 GMT -5
I hate rules of poetry. I never use them. And you're welcome!
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Post by Nathaniel Parker on Nov 3, 2010 22:33:35 GMT -5
XD These aren't your regular rules. It was sensible things they don't teach in the classroom XD These rules were like 'Don't use 'I' too much' 'Try not to use adverbs' (in any sort of writing like she quickly ran. . . . . . . think about it isn't running already quick?) 'Don't say 'I think' 'I want' 'I feel' ect' Things like that XD It totally discourages rhyming~ WHOOT XD Not that I didn't think your poem was nice :]
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Post by Jason Grace on Nov 3, 2010 22:40:16 GMT -5
Ah I see. 'But', there are different levels of running. Like I run super slow. So slow that it looks like I'm walking lol. And then there is running at the speed of a track runner. Just saying. And it's cool. My poems aren't great. I'm more skilled in story writing than poems.
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Post by Nathaniel Parker on Nov 4, 2010 5:50:43 GMT -5
Same here XD I was shocked when I got thrown into poem writing at that school, but it was good for me. Showed me that a poem can /always/ be improved and such. :] Either way it's a great way to just get a little burst of feeling out of you.
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Post by Jason Grace on Nov 4, 2010 9:24:01 GMT -5
Oh I know what you mean. I use to draw to get out my feelings but then I tried my hand at writing and I think that's so much better. I love it. I was sorta thrown into the newspaper staff at my school. I was a bit worried at first but I think that it's a great experience. I am currently writing a three part short story for the newspaper. The first two pieces have been published and i'm working on the third one. I think I might post it here when I'm done.
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